by Lenee.Roca
I can relate. im going through thee same exact thing. ive known my friend since grade school and we're in 9th now. it sucks. she has a boyfriend and a new best friend that is using her for her brother. she forgot about me in her new life and i hate to see her leave mine.. awesome job! |
by aimee
That was Beautiful |
Thats really beautifully writen! i've read a lot of ur poems and they're all something a lot of people can relate to..keep up the good work! |
by lisa
Wow thats a really good poem......5/5 |
WOW! Oh my god, it's like I wrote this poem myself! I can relate to it so much; I totally love it. I can't even pick a favorite apart. Each line has so much emotion and each word is so beautiful. Excellent write! Keep it up! |
I totally get this poem...i have a guy best friend like that...and everybody thinks that we are going out but we are not....its just that we are really close...this poem is like u r telling everybody that u miss him and he isn;t there when u most need him....u need his comfort and his love....am i right??? well this is a great poem...5/5 |
by Princess09
Great poem so sad yet sweet. "But now I see now I was naive" doesnt quite fit??? maybe re word it a little??? |
by Fallen~Tears
Really great poem.. 5/5 |