What's Wrong With my Life?

by marilyn marti   Dec 29, 2003


The days go by and I wonder why
why do I cry and hide it inside
why do I wanna die
instead of wanting to hide
why do I ask questions
if the answers I wont like
life is so hard
and sometimes love confuses your mind
sometimes u cant compare
you loose urself inside
and believe life is unfair

well im trying to be strong
but trying is not enough
God just tell me whats wrong
then maybe I wont have 2 give up.

PLEASE RATE?ID REALLY APPRECIATE IT -TY ANYWAY

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  • 20 years ago

    by terry

    again great job how many ppl feel that way some ppl are so good at hiding it ppl can't see the pain and hurt
    sad but true
    XOXOXo

  • 20 years ago

    by Lisa Reed

    Nice piece yet again ............. you must hate the thought of being in love now hehe judging from these poems ....things will work out for the better they always do.