Wow.. That's amazing. WONDERFUL flow.. It all pulled together so beautifully.:) And I like that it's short AND meaningful. It's good that you said everything you needed to say in such a small amount of words. And I loved the way you began it.. "Can somebody help me?
I'm drowning in reality." REALLY good. Keep it up, babe. *hugs*

~Jessica

Awesome flow, i love the rhymes,

Awwww! thats a great poem. keep up the good wrok! :)

Fukin awsome! flows, an i love short an powerfull

That is really good, the rhymes work so well and don't interrupt the flow of the whole thing... it's a really well-written strong, powerful poem, well done :) stabbylou x

Heh heh, this one felt really unique to me, I dunno how, but I guess it did for a reason. ;)

Wow, I really liked it. That wasn't what I was expecting judging by the title. I like the analogy between the kiss and committing suicide. I usually don't like these poems because they're cliche and blah, but yours wasn't at all. Keep up the awesome work!

I read it like I promised, and I'm glad I did.
I loved it! It was...amazing!!!
Keep it up.
*Drew