Pure

by *~Lynzi~*   Dec 25, 2005


Loving you from morning to night.
Not being able to keep you out of
my sight.
Sometimes i feel as if I\'m gripping
to tightly.
Yet whenever i slightly let go of you and loosen my grip.
You still stand close.
That leaves me to believe that this feeling we have is mutual.
It means we will last.
Together you and i.
Who cares what they think we have is unfair.
They just jealous they don\'t make such a good pair.
They live to see us separated, lonely and sad.
They hate the fact of seeing what we have.
Knowing that they could never have
what we have.
A love so true and pure, a love that is so strong.
You\'ve never done me wrong.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Letty

    I liked the poem, it was very nice .
    But I also agree with Bleeding Mascara . You are very talented, you
    just need to choose the right words and add a little more emotion . But other then that I loved the poem and I'm looking forward to reading more of your work .

    Keep up the good work
    Letty

  • 18 years ago

    by Bleeding Mascara

    Youve got the right idea and i like your style ut i think u need to try a littl harder to choose the right words so ur mesage is more powerful and easy to read

  • 18 years ago

    by anna

    I love the way you write.... neways wutsup?

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