When I\'m writing poetry, it does feel as if sometimes I am possessed by some higher power. As my fingers strike the keyboard and reveal these shadows of another place and another time, or even some another dimension…. Many times have a tried to flesh these things out, but it’s proving difficult; I will never stop trying, now that’s for sure.
Once again, thank you for taking your time with this critique.
When I'm writing poetry, it does feel as if sometimes I am possessed by some higher power. As my fingers strike the keyboard and reveal these shadows of another place and another time, or even some another dimension…. Many times have a tried to flesh these things out, but it’s proving difficult; I will never stop trying, now that’s for sure.
Once again, thank you for taking your time with this critique.
~Liz
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Without the "weird" special charecters implied...