That is an interesting poem
i liked this part:
"Eyes can't see the harm,
Ears can't hear the scream."

I teally liked how you incorporated senses.. i really liked it.

~David

Wow, this one really hit me a lot. Made me think too. Great job.

-Tainted Mikochan

Great poem
it sad

Your poem is really awesome. i can feel it!!!

Wow!! Great structured poem!! I can feel it all!! I love it all!! Very talented writer!! Keep it up;)
--CaTh--

Very good work. true to life. keep it up.

Really liked it it was sad but i can literally feel the feeling

Good work KiKi ma same birthday babe LOL 5/5 Mwa Nat x0x

Wow i really like this, its written with a lot of power. Nice work, take care
- Polly

Woww.. a deep poem!! well written!!

keep it up!!

-i.HEART.u-

Its is a very good poem 5/5
love from jess