Wow this poem is cute!! and it shows how i feel about a certain guy! you have a gift! keep writing kay!! and thnx for the comment!

*KaLiN*

Aww it was a sweet poem you're very talented keep it up and comment on mine if you have the time

It was awsome!!! i loved it! soo cute

I Luved it, total 5/5

That was truely beautiful, i have alot of other poems maybe check them out

Repetative but sweet. very sweet poem.

Wow i like this poem its the first of yours ive read..... can u do me a favour? id really like it if you could send me the next poem you write in austrian to me... so i can see what the language looks like and look at all the different things... id really like to see. is it easy to write in english ? this is like a new world to me wow thank you.... als_mi_sk8r-boi@hotmail.com

Very nice flow to the poem, I liked how it rhymed, it was a really wonderful poem 5/5

I loved that. It has a lot of passion. Keep writeng. :)

Sweet and touching and very good.

This is really good! the only grammatical error i see is
"She Wants To Be Shield From All The Noise"
should be
She Wants To Be SHIELDED From All The Noise
Anyway, i really wish I had a guy like that...

I loved this poem I thought it was awesome and i can deffinately relate...keep up the good work!!