This poem tocuhed me deeply, not only because it was a great poem but because i have a situation somewhat like, and this poem makes me think about it a lot. Keep it up it would be a bad to waste your talent
- cochise
if you could, comment my poem way i feel , or any of them, and tell me what you think

I definitly understand your longing in this poem, its funny what guys can do huh? Thanx so much for the comment on my poem, and keep up the writing.

~*Tess*~

Wow, you got your feelings across really nicely and it brought back some of my own feelings. *tear* That was a really good write.
you give me strength to go on
you make me look past the evils of this world
and let me see that we, together have won.
That line was alittle rough to read, but none the less (alot of lines are just stubborn) it was a really good write and I'm glad I got to read it. Keep up the good work!

Beautiful, it really was. ur feelings come across so well. could u read "me, myself and i"? cheers, id b grateful! xxxjes

Wow this one had a ton of emotion in it, very nicely written. You could tell that youre a talented writer by this peice. Hope to read more new works of yours and Ill check out some more from you later. (If ya can rrc one of mine can you do it to A Final Prayer?) Thanks again

Nice poem, Really Great, i like your choice of rhymes really great, i like your rhymthm and flow it flowed perfectly and i liked your detail, Awesome Poem keep it up 5/5 ill ttyl sometime

PeAcE

Beautiful!

Beautiful!

Aww hun I can really relate to this poem.. Great job..

Wow this poem is so sweet
i know the feeling exactly too

loving someone that much is such a wonderful feeling

That poem is wow. I love it..its sad...and sweet and idk shows ur emotions a lot. its really well written.

*Comment back*
Jess