Aww ..that was awesome....hopefully everything will work out for your friend.....everyone needs a father...bless your friend and her baby...later..

Ok from personal experience a baby doesnt change a man...If u want proof check MY baby daddy. He has 3. One wit me and 2 wit 2 otha girls.They got pregnant to keep him, and I am not saying thats why she got pregnant, but he didnt stay. He still played them and now he back wit me anyways. lolz...But something I must admitt, he loves his kids. All 3. Even though I think his last one aint really his(that baby does not look like him at all and for that matter she dont look like her mama either). A baby dont change a mans world but if she loves him like that she should let him kno and they should sit down and talk what kind of life they want for that baby. Its not just her anymore its the baby THEN her. You feel me. I dunno just let her kno I said good luck...

::MELI::

As usual, you spin the phrases into an intricate beautiful web of poetry. i love your work and i wish you a very happy new years! ;D 5/5

Wow.. this is a beautiful poem.. its so nice that you wrote this for your friend.. so much emotion and truth are in your poem.. its great and i love it! i really like how your poems arent all about you but for other people! awesome poem keep it up =)

--emotionless19*