Beautifully written. such a t0uching piece. great j0b with it. christmas wishes t0 y0u and y0ur family.
l0tz 0f l0ve / d0ra

Sweet and simple....I wish life was like this poem...lolz. I liked it alot nena. Keep up the good work....

::MELI::

Aww I am glad you have someone special to you who is like that. Great poem. I love it.

I love this poem.you have a special talent,keep up the great work.

Your man should be grateful for having an angel like you write beautiful tear-jerking poems for him. ;D keep up that ever-glowing talent! 5/5

Wow.. lots of love in this poem.. im sure your happy to be with him because it shows through in this poem =) i liked all the comparisons you made i especially liked
"you make me laugh
when what i want to do is scream"

great job on this one =) very creative and strong words =)

--emotionless19*