Amazing job i really think you are an amazing poet and i really love your writing because you just take out the good stuff and just thew it into a poem which is an awesome idea. I love it. I loved this poem also. I wasn't sure what you were trying to tell us at all but at the end how it says yours or mine i'm guess it was a flaw of one of you guys work of forgetting. i hope that made sence. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.