That was really good poem. 5/5 for the story, the message and the rhyming. I liked the variety of rhyme scheme you had in there, and the beginning's repitition was also good. However, some spelling such as:
this is wear the cutting begins.
should be 'where' for all of them... But lets face it, if it was read to me, I wouldn't have known a difference. So nothing held against you ;). Good work.