First let me say this is a lovely poem .
It's very sad and it's full of emotion .
I really liked the poem, but it was kind of hard to read . You have a lot of
mispelled words and a lot of incorrect
words . For example : IL is the abbreviation for Illinois, I should have
been I'll . I suggest you go back over
your poem and use spell check to edit .
Other then that the poem was beautiful .

Love Letty