Comments : Welcome to my World

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    This poem is very good, you wrote it very well. however, it may just be me, but i dont quite understand line 6...... other than that though a brilliant poem

  • 18 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    Amazing poem!!!! 5/5 if u could read my poem called dark angel that be awsome
    thanks
    ~natalie~

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Great work, beautiful job. Very good emotion in this poem. Good rhyme scheme and flow too.

  • 18 years ago

    by AlexJ

    Wow this is really dark and chilly! I like it!! Good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by blackrose1011

    Great images...dark poem. great read.