by Puerto_Rican_Chick Dec 26, 2005
category :
Life, society /
other
The never ending cycle of a smile and a frown. |
by pseudo
Wow.. that was truly touching. awesome poem. had a lot of depth and meaning to it. i liked the way you ended it. great title too. i hope that that cycle will be broken too. in the meanwhile keep on writing. greaat write =) |
I think this is very good. its writen well and gets its point accross very effectivly. |