Invisibilty

by RetiCent   Dec 26, 2005


Look at me, tell me what you see.. Do you see what everyone else see's?
A failure, a loser, and somebody who will remain invisible to the one he loves?
I'll tell you what you see, you see somebody with only 1 reason for living,
Her name is U*N*K*N*O*W*N, and without her there'd be no reason to continue on..

I might be invisible to her, but when I gaze into her eyes, I know that it's really worth all the pain..
You can never have a happy ending, no matter how happy you are..
It will become filled with hatred, jealousy, and lies..
All your promises will be broken, along with the ties..

You mean the world to me, and no matter how hard I try,
I can never own my personal world, I can try with all my might, but I will just die with failure..
Look into my eyes, and you will see all the broken fragments of my heart floating around,
Never to be put back together.. Only to piece the inside of my skin, causing me pain every second, for the rest of my life..

There is one question to be told.. That before my time has come, I must know the answer too,
And although I fear I already do, I want to here it first hand..
Do you love me?
Or do you still see me as the invisible boy that can never happy for just one minute in his life?

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  • 18 years ago

    by just a poet

    Read this poem and you'll understand why I wish I could write as good as you!!! Very sad and depressing, I really liked the line "i can't go on knowing that nothing i do is enough." because its not only bullshi* its has very deep meaning, and it makes me think maybe i'm not doing enough...

    and can u please say wt u mean by its bulshit.

  • 18 years ago

    by just a poet

    Read this poem and you'll understand why I wish I could write as good as you!!! Very sad and depressing, I really liked the line "i can't go on knowing that nothing i do is enough." because its not only bullshi* its has very deep meaning, and it makes me think maybe i'm not doing enough...

    and can u please say wt u mean by its bulshit.

  • 18 years ago

    by just a poet

    Oh and u told me u wish u could write like me? have u no noticed your own talent yet? you r one great poet and u write with great feeling and emotion and u well make ppl think deeper than face value and i apreciate that in your work

  • 18 years ago

    by just a poet

    As the name shows i can sooooooo relate xept with a guy who actualy happens to be a friend but if u ever wanna talk im always here and listening. take care and god luck with the girl and my advice thingy is if she can't see u then she's not worth it ur worth better then her and love ur self and hold urself in high self mesteem cuz if u dont then no one will

  • 18 years ago

    by creeesta

    This show so much feeling. You did a really good job transferring emotions to paper. It's really beautiful! :)

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