Voodoo scar

by mier   Dec 26, 2005


Die slay,
watch me.
Run away,
hide me.

The trees sway and scream,
I lie awake on the sand.
It's like a dream,
I forced someone to lend.

Dark minds gather,
It's raining blood.
The pain stabbed deeper,
fear begins to flood.

Cry for the twisted agony,
watch the chaos afar.
Commiting no mercy,
leaving a voodoo scar.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    -Cry for the twisted agony,
    watch the chaos afar.
    Commiting no mercy,
    leaving a voodoo scar.-

    ^Wow, this stanza is absolutely WOW! So haunting and truly superbly written.
    I love it, last stanza totally impressed me and whole piece has very powerful rhythm.