Dat made me cry 2, i love ur poems, i can see myself in them xx

There should be question marks...
"is i shed my tears..." I think that could be refraised a little better and then ur whole poem would be awsum, but it was really good anyway,
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Very sad, when you don't even know why someone left you...
It is a good thing when you can write about your feelings, it makes the pain barable, don't you think?
Nice poem!

Take care,

Ingrid

Man o wow I'm so tuched with ur poems it makes me what to get to know u in porson again 1000../1000

Aww that was soo good! i loved it!your a great poet, keep it up 5/5 from me

I LOVE IT!!
IT IS AN EMOTIONAL POEM.

Amazing job! im speechless! :)