I seldom touch on suicide poem myself but I find this quite a deep one that catches my attention. I like that you try to make the poem rhyme, though the lines are straggly, I find that it is still quite easy to read.

The emotions from these lines are strong. Great stuff. Thanks for sharing. =)

Amazing work! very deep and different! keep up the incredible work!! xoxo~Catalina

Very deep and emotional. great poem

Nice job, one thing though, the flow. but good job. I liked the beginning the best.

Wow this is truely an amazing poem and almost flawless! with each line has so much emotion and a powerful meaning to it.. wow. thisis such an amazing.. keep up this awesome work =)

--emotionless19*

Deep..very very deep. I like it though. I liked the whole poem. U are one amazing writer.
Juls

I hear you Emma, I am here for you. Although i do the same thing, I only smile a real smile at night, I hope you don't have to do this anymore. Cuz I know how badly it hurts, and i dont wish this on anybody. I really hope i can tlak to you and try to help. I am always here

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

Aw when did you die??!?!?!
Just kidding. o.O
This poem was ..... It was pretty good.

That was a good poem. to be honest, you could work on your rhythms some. other than that it was excellent.

Ahh...a very common topic for poetry, which i'm sure that almost every one can relate to. you captured this feeling very well, and expressed it even better 5/5

Very nice work... I must say that you may want to re-consider the flow of the poem and not to try too hard to make it rhyme... I like it though... keep up the good work!

Wow.. very dark and sad.. this had quite a lot of emotion and the descriptions were good. nice imagery! i could really imagine you lying there on the ground.. btw, i hope you are not actually a cutter.. good job!