It's a good poem, kinda of how I feel a lot. Check out some of my poems if you can.

-First of all,lmfao of at your profile, very nicely done hun.-

And your poem, I loved in the begining of it where you added three words..it slowed the poem down and gave it such a dark atmosphere.

Well done, the whole poem was a pleasure to read.

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Wow awesome i love it! xxx