Words can cut deeper than any...i love your words and how you can see the tears through your peotry.

Illuminati,
Thank you so much my friend, you're always so caring. But I wrote this poem four years ago, dedicaded to my first love...since then I never had a real boyfriend. I closed the doors of my heart until...well, that's a different story (will tell ya when it's time). ^_^

Awww this is so sweet, but i kno it hurts alot. hope u feel better soon hun. take care bye.

Beautifully written.....Great write!

That was beautiful...there are no words to explain how much i like this poem...im sorry for what happened stay strong!

Such good poems, thanks for always commenting on mine, i will comment on all of yours, when I have time soon

Very well written. Sad and strong... Wonderful!

Wow, This is really good! These words are great and they felt so real to me!
"Please, just go on and pack,
before I decide to take you back"
A wonderful write!

Aww. very sweet and sad poem. thanks for commenting on one of my poems! ;D 5/5

I love the poem 5/5. Sounds sad, sort of like the ones I write, except I think you did a much better job=).

You are seriously ((sp??)) amazing!!

Wow, what an excellent writer you are.

Thanks for commenting on my poem, and I know how much it hurts for someone you loved so much, to hurts you bad...

~Cass

0hh hun a t0uching piece. very heartfelt deep and em0ti0nal.

Please, just go on and pack,
before I decide to take you back.

Love this part, and the whole poem.

Well done...

Ps. Having seen your picture...I disbelieve your claim to be 99. Were that the case you must have had colour footage before even the guys at Kodak knew much about it.

I think someone is telling pork pies! :P

Such an emotional write, very heartfelt.

I know how you feel and you hit every point right on the bulls eye keep it up