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  • 18 years ago

    by Nikola

    Wow this poem really go tto me it's so deep and you can really tell that most girls fall like that.. i say 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by JJ

    "but he's gone with my heart in his hand
    now all i do is cry and dream of dry land."

    I love the way this flowed and rhymed. you've got talent girl, keep it up

    btw, thanks for the comment