Wow...that was such a powerful poem. I like it lots because it's so honest and true...so real. Great poem...perfection, there isn't such a thing...thanks for sharing and keep it up :-)

Thats a really good poem.. i excpesially (i spelled that wrong) liked the end

That was a very great poem. It was so sad and at the same time, so beautiful. Keep writing!

This poem is mad cool, keep it up (5/5)

Powerful and emotional poem! keep it up! great write! 5/5.
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Agin i am wowed. so very sad but a great read...good diction and flow. another 5/5 and another i can realte to. great work

Amazingly well written. wow.
I love th feeling and no i'm not just saying that
you're a really talented person
again i'm not lying infact this is now one of my faves.

"--Perfection only comes with death" should be the last line, for sake of the final verse and the final flow.

it was an astounding poem. I found it very invigorating and very saddening, yet somehow, enlightening. We all have to know we aren't perfect, and accept it.

This story was short, but simple and to the point.

well written.

5/5
~stevie white

This is so sad hate boys like that...but besides that this is another great poem!!...5/5