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by Amy Dec 27, 2005 category : Sadness, depression / other
Hey mum here i am bleeding to death in the gutter all because of them because they made a choice the choice to drink and drive and because they were stupid I'm about to lose my life i was driving home just me and my mates in the wrong place at the wrong time theres decided our fate they went through just a single red light i turned to avoid them it gave us such a fright we turned to sharply spun and hit a post why do we have to suffer from having a good day at the coast i managed to catch my breath i was bleeding from my head i looked at my boyfriend he was defiantly dead head smashed on the dashboard body mangled in his seat why did he have to die his life was far from complete i undid my seat belt and turned to see my friends one struggling for breath and one whose life had come to an end i tried to move to help her but my legs could not move she was chocking on her own blood and her life i quickly loosed i started crying all my friends were dead my boyfriend and best mates why couldn't it be me instead? i heard a quiet rumbling scared it was a broken wire i tried to get out but the car exploded into fire screaming for help I'm sitting in my seat i see people through the windows standing on the concrete they ran away from the flames i started to choke this is the end of my life its really not a joke i screamed and cried smashing my arms on the wheel this only happens on the movies! this cannot be real! choking and screaming i grabbed my boyfriends hand I'm coming with you, wait for me i screamed in demand i slowly passed out the smoke was too much i was awoken by a familiar touch my boyfriend grabbed me and we flew out of the car i looked down to see something truly bizarre my body lying there i screamed and tried to shout i saw the firefighters try to put the fire out i cried so hard and my boyfriend held me the car exploded our bodies lost in the debris thats it our life is lost all because those guys were incredibly stupid and chose to drink drive they didn't get hurt in fact they cant be found i don't think they know what they did cause they didn't stick around they didn't help and try to save out lives instead we had to slowly die and burn till the firefighters arrived this happens all the time no matter where you are people who drink and hop in their cars it never seems to be them who gets hurt or dies its never their family whose left to cry but they must live with it for the rest of their lives they killed someone because they chose to drink drive
by aimee
Great* writer and i wish i could be half as good as u r one day, keep it up. good work@MY
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