KHUDA KI FITRAT...

by PURE HEART   Dec 27, 2005


Actually this was written when i lost faith in GOD some time before. and i realized that why god gives pain to his lovers. u know why?
HE does so bcoz its true that we remember HIM only in grief. HE also needs some1 to talk 2. thats y HE gives pain to us because of jealosy that v can share our feelings wid our loved ones and HE cannot.
HE keeps on giving us pain so that we do not forget HIM.

insaano ki kya baat kahoon
maana jalna uski fitrat me hai.
lekin khuda to usse bad kar hai
to fir usko kyu humse jalan hai.

bando ki khushiyon ke darwaaze khol,
fir us par kyu taale daale.
kahin use bhool na jayein,
aur kisi aur se apne gam na baate.

dua ki thi ki ek humrahi mil jaye,
par khuda ko gawaara na tha.
chaahat thi ek sahaare ki,
par khuda ko manjoor na tha.

isiliye to.....

khuda kisse maange apne humrahi ko,
apne bando ko tadpaakar
unse hi baate apni tanhai ko.

tabhi to khuda humse bad kar hai,
isliye use hum se jalan hai....

*** ITS TRUE THAT IF WE DO NOT HAV ANY PAIN OR GET HURT, WE WILL NOT THINK OF GOD.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Truly in Love

    Interesting... I like the variation of your thoughts... Nice to see that this was written in Hindi... Must say-- nice job.. keep writing...

    Love,
    Ipsita

  • 18 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    We love one special person far too much in our life and we end up getting hurt.But for god everyone is special and he equally loves all of us,So it is hard to imagine or tell,how much of pain he is being put through...but he still smiles,b'coz he knows love is onething,that hurts with its pain and heals with its pleasantness...
    So enjoy while it lasts and cherish it in your memory for the rest of ur life....take care and keep smiling,Bharti...
    Wish you a very very happy and prosperous New Year....Bye

  • 18 years ago

    by Rakesh

    Hi,
    Great tht u hav written in Hindi..it reminded me of the numerous ghazals I hav come across :)
    but on a more serious note I agree to wat u hav put in ur poem..its very sad tht u part with the ones u r ready to give ur life for..its sad..life is cruel..All I can say is I hope u dont go thru all tht Im going thru..Keep Smiling :)..Hav a great year ahead..
    Thnx for ue comments..mayb u cld read As You Leave Me..it sums up my state of mind..
    Take Care.

  • 18 years ago

    by chavii

    You indeed are deep thinker with a good poet , keep up the good work dear.

    God bless you
    chavii

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Well thats really a unique vision!! atleast i never thought this way before & i liked the idea..somewhere seems to be the answer to my poem "tell me why"..we really do hv that chemistry!!

    very nicely written...spl the first stanza

    insaano ki kya baat kahoon
    maana jalna uski fitrat me hai.
    lekin khuda to usse bad kar hai
    to fir usko kyu humse jalan hai.

    u really add that xtra depth whenever u write in hindi or may be i just feel that xtra punch..

    keep it up...great work

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