That was very good neo. I enjoyed reading it.
I liked this part:
When I feel the soothing breeze blowing,
Breaking the crispy leaves and floating.
When I see a lonely kite heightening,
I always think you are inspiring.

and the beginning was very good too.
much love,
marjan

Woah, i LOVE it so much! keep the good work up!

This is really good poem!!! thanx 4 ur comment

This is really good poem!!! thanx 4 ur comment

Neo,
Your poems are amazing. Thank you for the comment. You seem like a really sweet guy. Your comment caught me off gaurd a little. Only some of my poems reflect my life, and how I feel. A lot of them are from random thoughts I have, or songs I hear, maybe stories I read, or poems. Things like that strike something, and I have to write. I enjoy life, don't get me wrong. No, I haven't had the best one, but I know there are wrose lives out there. I don't live in regret, I live my life as it is. I don't want to leave until it's actually my time to go. Poems don't always have to reflect someone's life. Could be a thought, or anything.
Keep up the good work. Don't ever stop.

Love,
Katie