Wow that was soo good
i love it
keep it up
xox
Renee

Thats a sweet tender poem , yes true love is beyong lust its kinda heavenly in nature.
Thanks for commenting , really appreaciate it.

chavii.

I like this one also, a very nice rhyme/flow to it.At first I thought some of the lines (like the 2nd one) had an awkward feel to them, but actually upon re-reading it, it works well because it is not the usual phrasing.Love, loss, and the wondering & doubts of love seem to be your strong point as you really capture that emotion and convey it with such a soft strength.I'm impressed.