Oeh! the beginning is so powerful. Something a lot of people can relate too.
Building a wall.. our defence mechanism.... Beautiful I tell you.
I never rate 5/5 but this time I might just have to do that,
Well done indeed,
~* TasH *~

I agree with natasha the wall part was so powerful i loved it
keep up this great work
love ya
Em

This poem is really good keep up the great work.I'm going to add you to my favorites.

WOW! VERY POWERFUL. AWESOME WORK. KEEP IT UP!
~SMILES~