Comments : American Girl

  • 18 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Ugh, I hate those peopleee. Damn them all to the depths of barbie Hell. E> Great work, just a few spelling mistakes that get to me, as well as whereever you pasted it from, the apostrophes and such don't agree with p&q's spell checker, so it leaves a bunch of symbols, it's a bit distracting :-P. But any who, all in all it's great, hopefully it's a song for your band, if it isn't, it should be! E>E>

    Much love,
    Take care,
    Mortie.x.

  • 18 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    I'm glad you took the idea of conformity further, because you used it well. Thank you for the constructive criticism. I can always use it :)
    -A

  • Oh thats so true!!!. but in my countrry the blonde tourist r very nice, but the "american gurls" that live and study in the best school in here r exactly like that!!.. great poem!! and keep writing..

    P.S= thnks 4 commenting in my poem..

  • 16 years ago

    by Childofthecherry

    Conformistis are such ass holes
    pretty soon they'll be no individuallity left in the world