Ugh, I hate those peopleee. Damn them all to the depths of barbie Hell. E> Great work, just a few spelling mistakes that get to me, as well as whereever you pasted it from, the apostrophes and such don't agree with p&q's spell checker, so it leaves a bunch of symbols, it's a bit distracting :-P. But any who, all in all it's great, hopefully it's a song for your band, if it isn't, it should be! E>E> |
by EpithetPoet
I'm glad you took the idea of conformity further, because you used it well. Thank you for the constructive criticism. I can always use it :) |
Oh thats so true!!!. but in my countrry the blonde tourist r very nice, but the "american gurls" that live and study in the best school in here r exactly like that!!.. great poem!! and keep writing.. |
Conformistis are such ass holes |