I love it, very powerfully spoken! Truly a wonderful write!

He didnt chose another life, he changed the things that didnt work out in his life, that doesn't mean he doesn't love his kids anymore, i know u never said that but its like u think he abandoned you, he didnt, im glad u went over for christmas, u should be grateful that u have a dad, no matter what mistakes he did, i mean come on u've made mistakes too.

Wow. Steph, once you again you just surprise me! Whenever I think you have reached the top, and that it would be imposible to push it any further, you just come up with a new poem, and it turns out to be better then whatever I have read so for. This.. Is... WONDERFUL. I loved every word. Beautiful written. Once again you have showed how talented you are. I'm a big fan of your work! Just keep it up hun, keep it up. I would also like to wish you a happy new year =)

(blushes) erm.. sorry the first phrase with the "once you again you" was horrible.. god what a typo... ahum sorry forgive me hun =) haha

Incredible i think u have alot of talent i love your poems!! wow 5/5

I'm sure it's true and even i like it the way u use the beautiful words soo keep it up....good job 5/5..lol

Jammal

Hey steph, I know the poem was done a long time ago, but I've just read it and I know who you're talking about exept for the athlete and I really think you're right. I really love you're poems. Love you. Jenn