Hey,thanks for the comment on mine,and I like this one.It seems you put a lot of thought into it,and your profile's right,people do lie about nething,and most are idiots for not telling the truth like god wants us to.Very good,I like it!And if you can,comment on some more of mine!Thanks!

Thank you for your vote my friend it feels like ages since someone have spoken so kindly of my poems.
I love the way you describe the passion of love. Looking forward to hear from you again, Miss Krugeer.

Nice poem i enjoyed reading it big words though im 13 so it was hard for me to understand LOL but i still loved it keep writing and checking out my poems and i will do the same for you
*TOODLES*
---Shayna---

It doesnt rhyme but it dont have to it so deep and emotional i have alot of sad poems u should check them out