WOW! That poem really hit me b/c I have tried to kill myself about 8 times in my life almost succeeding so yeah. I am basically over trying to die, but I am still trying to find a good reason to live for so this poem was very inspiring. Thanks.

-Tainted Mikochan

I loved it - you captured so much - it was built up and up and then your answer just relieved it all and I felt it and although I'm feeling slight down at the moment it cheered me up made me see the light you know? well done and thankyou =)

This is a very good poem. its original and could even be seen as inspiring to some.

Interesting, a thinking poem...keep it up

Wow this was very interesting! it was well thought and really made me think... i really liked it! keep up the good work!

sammie

Lol I like that ending, it was like the comical relief almost. The whole way through though, it made me rethink my answer. Usually I'd say, in my bed, but you're right, I'd be leaving my dead body for a loved one to find me... I don't know if I'd want that.... Well anyway, I don't exactly want to think about that, so I'll just say, well done! Really unique. Keep up the good work!

I'm a big fan of the darker poems even though about half of mine are the sappy love poems. I loved it. It made me think alittle. good job. 5/5 David

Amazing job. I think you did an amazing job on this. I don't think anyone had a concept of that before. And my answer is the same as yours i don't want to die yet i'm to young. keep it up. keep on writing you have really great talent. love always and forever.

I have pondered that question so many times in my life. My fear is that my death will be the results of my ex husbands hands.... I pray otherwise

I agree with you however... My answer too is Not Yet

---Sher

Good answer great poem oustanding question 5>>>>>>>>>>>>

That was a great poem....Amazing.Your a great poet.A young one at that, but i dont have much room to talk i am only a year older.Anyways,great poem.Keep up the good work

-Russell-

For being 12 years old that was really deep. I'm Completely amazed by how talented you are. Great job 5/5

Great poem..gives people something to think about... very well written and well thought out with a great message! it also inspires people and what a great way you ended loved! =)

--emotionless19*

I really really liked that! I absolutely love the last stanza...i don't even know what to say. It doesn't have a set rythm (sp?) at least how I was reading it and I usually don't like poems like that but it really worked in this one...Great Job, 5/5!
xoxo-Sierra

Its a really good poem, brings a lot of thought after it...

Aww this is really good never really thought about it keep it up 5.5

Nice job, your young, but good for such a young person (no offense meant) at first i didnt like it that much but the ending was really powerful. i think its awesome that you want to live.. you dont seem (through this poem) that your like a lot of teenagers, who are depressed to the point that they consider suicide. thats good, i am one of those teenagers and i hope taht you never have to deal with what comes with that...
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amanda

Yeah, I think tha's my answer too. 5/5

Wow i love poems that make you think, and this one did it is very good i like the whole idea i just love it lol. very very good woork i hope to see some new poems by you

lots of love

*~*Becky*~*

Wow this is really good. It's very thought provoking & powerful. I love the way that you ended it. & as for the answer, I agree with you.. not yet!! Great job! 5/5**