Thank you very much for all your comments. I think this poem is great. This poem has what you call an intensity to it, making readers go on the edge.

Wow.
SO Full of emotion man!
So much mixed up feelings and you really show the reader how you feel!

Well done, It interested me =D

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This poem sort of scared me, like i could feel what you were feeling. I really feel like i want to know more, like you have a story to tell. I really think your talented and i hope you never have to feel like the way you felt in this poem again.

Wow, this poem is great. so deep and full of emotion. very intense, i had to keep reading. very well done. take care now.

Omg, is this true? you need to tell someone if it is. wow, your poem made me feel the pain and know your fear... i loved it. wxcellent poem. keep up the good work. 5/5.
**lisa**

Amazing job. Okay now let me make it clear to me what the poem was talking about and if i'm wrong i'm so so sorry. But it's about a girl that you really really liked maybe loved and she moved on from you and all she does now is cut?? or something that's this new guy making her do because she's all in pain and you can't help her because she won't let you or she doesn't want you get in volved or you both dont talk. I think i get it if not i have something flowing threw me when i was finished reading it. You did an amazing job. keep it up. keep on writing. thanks for the comments hun. love always and forever.

How aweful that anyone should endure that torrid fears and pains of abuse. Though the physical wounds heal rather quickly the scars and nightmares last forever.

I truly pray that all victims will some day be freed from the prison they must endure.

--Sher

Very powerful poem. So much sadness in it.

I really liked this poem i think your writing is great.. u are fantastic
hope u always read my poems and add some comments coz i like it when you do that..hehe lol

I dissagree, this is a good poem. full of emotion and pain.. so powerful... really great job, its great you can vent your pain, fear, anger. hang in there, and keep up the great work! xoxox