Im the first commenter i am i am i am. :D. its a great poem. i loved it. keep up the gudwork. 5/5

Hmmm intersting...
its more of sinful than dark but very interesting aswell...
i like it!

thanks for sharing it ...
keep it up!

Wow that was a really good poem...you've wrote better stuff but it was still really very good... 5/5 keep it up n I'll see ya tonights hunny.
Loves ya
Batty Becca (Number 2 Angel) =P
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