Set Me Free

by Fighter (Ariane L.)   Dec 27, 2005


Unable to really be free,
Your chains imprison me.
Stripped from my identity,
Forced to fake who I really am.

These chains restrain me;
They unable me to move freely.
I'm forced to abide your rules,
Forced to be "the example".

Prisoner within your hands,
I'm unable to really live.
Restricted, because of your chains.
So please, set me free...

*definitely not my best. suggestions on how to improve are welcome :D

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  • 18 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    Possibly make it longer without stretching it out you no? and like pure silence says and i quote your usuall witty umf. xox still brilliant though xox

  • 18 years ago

    by Allison

    I liked it. I think that you wrote it very well and it shouldn't be changed. ~5/5~

  • 18 years ago

    by just a poet

    Erm. its not bad i think u kinda need to oput a bit more feeling in it then it'd be better. i liked it tho.take care.

  • 18 years ago

    by just a poet

    Erm. its not bad i think u kinda need to oput a bit more feeling in it then it'd be better. i liked it tho.take care.

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    I dunno hunny It feelts complete yet... missing something to gve it your usuall witty umf, you know? Sorru I cant be of further help hunny, I love it though as always, Love you oodles

    Jenn

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