I love it! great job...i really liked the last stanza 5/5

~melanie~

This was a beautiful poem!! I hope it all goes well!!! Whoa its still echoing in my mind. I'm actually kinda going through something similar right now and i'm really happy lol. So keep it up!!!
luv jess xoxo

Great poem i loved it!!!!!!

Wow this kicks ass. i love it so much. youre an awesome writer. im glad there a few new ones from when i last checked! coz i just loooove your poems. missing our convos

That is definatly a beautiful poem! made my heart drop lol..and yes volleyball is definatly the greatest thing known to man kind. i love it more than poetry! that definatly made my day! .. how did your tournament go? well im hoping:)!!

It was a great poem, yur so good at writin

Definate 5/5

Wow this is awesome!!! Really beautifully written. I just had to check out your work after I read you like ice cream! I loooooooove ice cream! We should start a club...hehe....5/5 take care

Polly x

Wow, great poem!