Garrett

by Tiffani   Dec 28, 2005


****i know this poem really sucks, but writing helps with my emotions. so if you like it great, if you don\'t im sorry. please comment on what you think, if there is anything i can do to improve it***

there is nothing else i can say,
but GARRETT....
if you only knew him,
there is no other word to describe him...
but his name....
we met first day of school,
6th grade....
i knew from then on it was more that a friend that i made,
he is my best friend,
i call him mt big brother...
only a year apart....
i want to be his lover,
this i deny...
even tho when its said i blush horribaly....
i know that there is something there,
more than friends...
its chemistry,
something just clicks....
he is natural to me...
like fish in a sea,
nothing about him suprises me...

my eyes light up when i see his number calling...
my heart jumps by the look of his face...
i talk to him every day,
and yet i still get butterflies seeing him in the halls...
wtf is wrong with me??
he\'s a druggie, geek, gay, and wishie-washy...
why do i want him so bad??
god damn...
i cant beleive all this time i didnt see.
i love him....
LOVE,
LOVE,
LOVE HIM!!!!!!!
why didnt i open my eyes?!
and take a look around....
i told myself i hated him,
but i beat him up just to touch him,
i yelled at him just to hear his voice...
i threw any chances we had together away,
and i didnt think i cared,
but i do...
and ill say these words to you,
if its the last thing i do...
\"garrett, I love You\"

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tiffani

    Thank you!

  • 18 years ago

    by SoRrOwFuL Claire

    I love the poem its so passionate! i wish i had a love like that for someone one thing: some bits dont flow too well but its expressing how you feel so it really doesnt matter but keep goin I LOVED IT!!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Tiffani

    You know i say that all the time!!! lol no lie. thats why i read all my poems like 1000 different ways over and over. lol. well thank u verry much for commenting!!

    MucH LovE TffanI

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Hi There!!
    I honestly hv given this one "4", though i liked the poem but then in between it lost the flow.
    While u r writing a poem, the feelings u r going thro and the way u r reading it after writing is totally different from how readers will feel and read...& thats where it makes the difference...i think i made sense.

    well overall it was very unique....& i sincerely loved this part

    i told myself i hated him,
    but i beat him up just to touch him,
    i yelled at him just to hear his voice...
    i threw any chances we had together away,
    and i didnt think i cared,
    but i do...
    and ill say these words to you,
    if its the last thing i do...
    "garrett, I love You"

    take care and all the best forever

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