With wonder comes feeling

by firexflys   Dec 28, 2005


So far away it seems, my heart cant stand it,
It's breaking at the seams, it gets harder everyday
That passes by,

I wish to see you
I wish to hear your voice
I long for the day that once again,
I am by your side

This distance hurt me so, I am not sure how
Much longer I can take it how much longer
I can try, I just miss you so much that it
Kills me on the inside,

And I wonder all day long how you are,
And the people who come along,
I wonder to my self maybe you might
Feel something for them maybe find
Some one new to belong,

I can't help but feel like I am fading away,
And that someday soon you find that some
One new, and that there will no longer be
A me and you,

I feel I'm slipping away losing my dear love,
Like things are going to get to tough,
And he might just decide to give up.

© written by FireXfly
R/R/C i do the same low votes please explain why or dont vote at all. b/c i want to know what i did wrong

PS i am not really sure what to put this under i know it a love poem, so im put it under lost love b/c it's kinda about feeling like i am lose the one i so dearly love

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Such a sad poem - but never ever give up :) Great use of imagery and sadness.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by ShaeBaeBae

    Sorry, it is skiddles again. i made a mistake. thanx for cometing on the day that she met you! i feel like an idiot!

  • 18 years ago

    by ShaeBaeBae

    Thanx for voting on my civil war poem. what i liked about your poem was that you did not hold back your feelings about this guy. if he ever dumped you, i say show him this poem, and maybe he will have a different out look of things! 5/5 keep up da great writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl. an0ther amazing p0em. l0t 0f em0ti0n in this. beautifully written darl. t0uching sad heartfelt a great j0b 0nce again. g0od j0b expressin urself. keep up the great w0rk. here if u ever need t0 talk! =)
    l0tz 0f l0ve / d0ra

  • 18 years ago

    by Ladida

    This is another really beautiful poem. Fear and pain are obviously not fun things to have to experience, but they do make some good poetry! Anyways, just wanted to let you know that it's cool if you ask me whatever question you needed to ask. I'll try my best to give you some good advice! And please check out some of my other poems I think you'll like them and be able to relate to them. You can e-mail me if you want to about your question. Keep up the beautiful work!

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