Very nice job and easy to relate. keep it up?

This is another really beautiful poem. Fear and pain are obviously not fun things to have to experience, but they do make some good poetry! Anyways, just wanted to let you know that it's cool if you ask me whatever question you needed to ask. I'll try my best to give you some good advice! And please check out some of my other poems I think you'll like them and be able to relate to them. You can e-mail me if you want to about your question. Keep up the beautiful work!

Hey darl. an0ther amazing p0em. l0t 0f em0ti0n in this. beautifully written darl. t0uching sad heartfelt a great j0b 0nce again. g0od j0b expressin urself. keep up the great w0rk. here if u ever need t0 talk! =)
l0tz 0f l0ve / d0ra

Thanx for voting on my civil war poem. what i liked about your poem was that you did not hold back your feelings about this guy. if he ever dumped you, i say show him this poem, and maybe he will have a different out look of things! 5/5 keep up da great writing!

Sorry, it is skiddles again. i made a mistake. thanx for cometing on the day that she met you! i feel like an idiot!

Such a sad poem - but never ever give up :) Great use of imagery and sadness.

Peace. [Sole]