I really didn't understand this one. There were a lot of quotations and stuff. Maybe it was intended to be confusing to a lot of people, but I just didn't get it lol. I did think the flow was well done and I thought the rhyming was good. Keep it up! 4/5 xoxo

Samantha

Even though i didn't quite understand all of this poem (bit comlex) i liked what i did get! 5/5!! people have obviously been in a bad mood when the gave u a low score!

Great work. After reading your little description I can fully understand and appreciate this poem. 5/5

"all it can yield"
[This sort of messed up the flow]

Also, everything after that, well I wasn't really happy with.

This is by far one of the best pieces I have read from you. It started off extremely strong, it died down towards the end, but I really liked how it started, and I still think this is great.

"Let's heaven here"
our ghastly pleas
"Let's love and leave"
the tranquil seas

^^ Amazing..

My favourite part was the last part, that really got to me.
I thought this was a beautiful penned poem, really touching.
As always, I loved all of it.

I really like this poem and I think that the concept within the poem is very sad, yet true. I think that you ended it very nicely... It really got your point across. The flow and rhythm of this was very good and I just absolutely loved this poem! Great job! 5/5

Everyone puts words from songs on this site. I just liked the way the lyrics sounded so I put it on here. If you check anyone's quotes on here, you will see lyrics from songs..I will put (Taking Back Sunday) in parenthesis after the quote but that's all you're getting out of me.

I liked this I got it I think...but the explanation on top did help a little bit I think you did a good job

The word choice was strong, and the emtion was deep and clear. You did an excellent job. I wouldn't have understood it either if you hadn't written the meaning at the top, but excellent write 5/5