Funny how in the daylight you can run from the pain and horrors of life, but how the knock you back come nightfall. At least that has been my experience.

Nice poem here babe. I truly hope that someday you find inner peace and love even in the darkest hours of the night.

When you do please share the feeling with us. Let me know how it feels...

--Sher

Hello, I've heard alot of people talking about their favourite writers and you just happen to be mentioned quite a bit, so I thought I'd check you out. And not that I'm trying to suck up to you lol, but I can definately see why. That was a great write :) I'm glad I got to see it and I hope I'll see more. Happy Holidays!

Very dark Bill... Well written my friend :)

Oh wow, so sad! I really relate to this, great job! Beautifully written!

8-( I don't know....I love the writing and everything, but it's just dark/sad. Your poem are always so touching and I'm just speechless with this one...You know....never mind...take care and smile, I want to feel the happiness that your smile brings to our world.

Sowwy, I'm just weird sometimes (well, lets be honest, most of the time) lol Hugs and always take care Bill!

Yo man nice verse I can relate to this poem as many poeple have said but U have to put into words for all to hear there are things in the night that creep out and torment you others come out during day but you can fight them off but duirng the night it's like I'm going to die tonight....

well written verses dude

MariA