This wasnt the best of yours i had read but it was still awesome. you have so much talent.
i want to say thank you for sharing these with me, they are awesome
xxxxx

Wow!
I found the last part breathtaking, I wasn't expecting that.
I'm going to add you to my favourites now, I want to keep reading your work, you are an inspiration.

I'm not sure why... but I just HAD to read this poem, just because of the title. And the contents of this poem did not disappoint. Your gift for poetry... you did not learn this. You must have been born with it. :)

It just so "Happens" that I love this poem.

Faith
lies
hate
guise
truth
spies
love
dies

This could be better as a stanza in my opinion but other than that so good poem

I loved loved loved the ending! It was good and a great twist nice job!

Faith
lies
hate
guise
truth
spies
love
dies
this part of the poem is my absoulte favorite. I think it enhances the power of the poem like this excellnt job. Well written, and the word choice is amazingly brillant. 5/5