Brilliantly written poem.

Beautifully written, as are all of your poems, but this one is touching and sad. Nights are not meant for tears and sadness. Keep your head up, less you might miss something in life.

Wonderful flow and touching words. keep it up

This poem reflects very well afeeling of sorrowand regret for leting a good one get away.. well written

Awwww this is really sad. I'm so sorry. This is an amazing poem though i enjoyed reading it. yes it is a regret kinda thing of getting the one you knew was going to be with you get away. to me it's what they want not what you want. They come first. And if he wanted to go then let him go but it really sucks knowing that the one you once loved or whatever is gone with the WRONG girl and you can't do anything about it. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

That is very bittersweet. To lose a love and be left with all the memories.
I've had some similar things happen, though mostly with pets. It hurt so much when they died even now, more than three years later, I can still cry as though they had died just yesterday.
I understand that it hurts to lose a loved one, and to know that they took the wrong path is even worse.

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Hey there. great poem, it really expresses how you feel, though i think you could have expanded on it a little more. but great work
Ben

I can so relate to this poem. you don't know how much. i lived it, and i loved this poem. this is a chapter of my life. well said.

5/5 david