Symphonic balance (song)

by brown eyes and a melancholy smile   Dec 28, 2005


Symphonic balance (song)

We're a perfect circle you and I,
A perfect balance of truth and lies.
We're a half-cast symphony of light and dark,
Shadow and radiance from finish to start.

(chorus)
A symphonic balance, you and I,
A perfect moment when day meets night.
A tragic event, calamitous beauty.
You're slowly killing me, but... thus sooths me.

We're a wonderful weaving of genuine and fake,
A random occurrence of countless mistakes.
We're a limbo of bitter life and sweet death,
A graveyard of promises dismissively pledged.

(chorus)
A symphonic balance, you and I,
A perfect moment when day meets night.
A tragic event, calamitous beauty.
You're slowly killing me, but...thus sooths me.

We're a perfect circle you and I,
Frustrations and fear weep from my eyes,
We're a half-cast symphony of light and dark,
I guess I love you, and it tears me apart.

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  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Brilliant! I love the entire piece from start to end. There isn't any part of it that could be better.
    I especially love these lines:

    "Shadow and radiance from finish to start."

    "A random occurrence of countless mistakes."

    Oh and the last two lines of the chorus, just wow!
    Keep it up~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by Hades

    Thank you for your kind words and praise, but you are far more skilled than I, continue writing, you have a gift

  • 18 years ago

    by ~* gifted little fallen~*

    That is wow.... there is really no other words for that .... wow.
    5/5

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