by AlexJ
Yeah I know these feelings! I've been in both positions "can't love" and "can't stop loving"... Both suck :/ But your poem was great :)))!!! |
Aww, excellent poem. i loved it. it had a lot of emotion in it. keep up the good work. 5/5 |
by David Paul
I'll have to agree with alex all the way. It was really good but the position it displayed sucks. good job 5/5 |
by Katlynn
This is an amazing poem. Your very talented. Well this poem is sad this happened to me once. I mean i did lie to my best friend and told him that i didn't want a boyfriend right now but then he finally found out i was dating another guy and he just yelled at me. called me a sl.ut and a wh.ore which really broke me into two. And we hardly talked for about a week or two now we are talking but not as good as we once where. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever. If you need anyone to talk to i'm here. |
by Russell
Very nice poem.I know a few people who have gone through this.Your very talented....I hope things look up.So keep your head up...and take care |
by xX-jess-Xx
I really like this poem its amazing, but...i think the flow could be a little better tho. but, all the same its a great poem! keep it up xxjes |
Wow that was really good. I liked it alot. Your a very talented writer!!! Great job. |
by pseudo
Wonderful poem=) but yet very sad.. you spoke your true feelings i know how it feels to lose a friendship.. beautifully written keep it up =) once again wonderful poem ;) |
by Robert
I love this poem... i once had a friend who i loved more than a friend, and our friendship had to be broken cos of me :( |
by Lexie
This is such a sad poem. I know how it is to lose a friend. If you want to read some of my poems. I have some about the loss of a friend. Wonderful poem... 5/5 |
by avery
Awe, im sorry that had to happen, great work, i love your poems and how you can find ways to make it flow. |
Ver sad...amazingly portryed..good job hunn. |