Comments : Our Broken Bond.

  • 18 years ago

    by AlexJ

    Yeah I know these feelings! I've been in both positions "can't love" and "can't stop loving"... Both suck :/ But your poem was great :)))!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Aww, excellent poem. i loved it. it had a lot of emotion in it. keep up the good work. 5/5
    **lisa**

  • 18 years ago

    by David Paul

    I'll have to agree with alex all the way. It was really good but the position it displayed sucks. good job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Katlynn

    This is an amazing poem. Your very talented. Well this poem is sad this happened to me once. I mean i did lie to my best friend and told him that i didn't want a boyfriend right now but then he finally found out i was dating another guy and he just yelled at me. called me a sl.ut and a wh.ore which really broke me into two. And we hardly talked for about a week or two now we are talking but not as good as we once where. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever. If you need anyone to talk to i'm here.

    ps thanks for the comment means alot to me.

  • 18 years ago

    by Russell

    Very nice poem.I know a few people who have gone through this.Your very talented....I hope things look up.So keep your head up...and take care

    -Russell-

  • 18 years ago

    by xX-jess-Xx

    I really like this poem its amazing, but...i think the flow could be a little better tho. but, all the same its a great poem! keep it up xxjes

  • 18 years ago

    by Live, Laugh, Love

    Wow that was really good. I liked it alot. Your a very talented writer!!! Great job.

  • 18 years ago

    by pseudo

    Wonderful poem=) but yet very sad.. you spoke your true feelings i know how it feels to lose a friendship.. beautifully written keep it up =) once again wonderful poem ;)

    --emotionless19*

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert

    I love this poem... i once had a friend who i loved more than a friend, and our friendship had to be broken cos of me :(

  • 18 years ago

    by Lexie

    This is such a sad poem. I know how it is to lose a friend. If you want to read some of my poems. I have some about the loss of a friend. Wonderful poem... 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by avery

    Awe, im sorry that had to happen, great work, i love your poems and how you can find ways to make it flow.

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Ver sad...amazingly portryed..good job hunn.

    LISSA