Comments : I can't keep forgiving you

  • 18 years ago

    by melissa

    WOW!.....i can really relate to this.i know how it feels to keep giving to someone who just keeps tryin to break ya down. believe in your self, and keep up the great work. im gonna add you to my favorites.i give it a five!

  • 18 years ago

    by Crystal

    Good work! :) thanks for my comment....keep up the great work! and i can totally relate to you....

  • 18 years ago

    by Cuddles

    OMG is all that comes to mind. I love everything about this poem-the flow, the rhythm, the word choice, the sheer beauty of it. This is an incredible poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Amy

    LOVE IT! Good words you used in it. I felt the anger, love, hate all that.