Favorite birthday present

by alwaysremeniceus   Dec 28, 2005


Remembering 2 years ago,
just like some story told,
a day that pretty much meant nothing,
except how she's one more year old.

that was the 14th birthday,
and that night,
her favorite gift wasn't bought with money,
but she realized what she wants from life.

now today she turns 16,
she still chases after what is missing in her heart,
even though now he's closer,
yet they are still so far apart.

this day still means nothing,
age wasn't any matter,
but she remembers this day as the day she fell for him,
and continues to hope even though the ending may be latter.

first the day meant nothing,
and maybe someday it will be a day to resent,
but he will always be in her heart and mind,
her favorite birthday present.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Great flow

  • 18 years ago

    by Katlynn

    Very cute. i loved it. amazing job. you have some talent. 14 years old having a crush and 2 or 3 years later at 16 still having that crush but he's more closer to you then you were 2 or 3 years ago now that's what i call a friend with a crush. i loved reading this keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

  • 18 years ago

    by blackrose1011

    Cute poem, I got kicked off before i got ot comment...but I will do it now. Thats a long time to be just crushing girl! Its great that you think of it in such a good way

  • 18 years ago

    by AlexJ

    A really beautiful poem! Nice flow! Good job!

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