Write a secret scream

by master of shadow   Dec 28, 2005


Write what you have not the words to say,
give your writing strength,
vent all you feel within,
let loose your emotions,
safely and secretly,
none have to know of what you write,
no one has to know what you feel,
express yourself onto paper,
let your emotions run free,
let it be your silent scream,
your secret cry,
an outlet for all you feel,
see part of yourself in the ink,
let it out,
allow it to be free,
no one has to know what you write,
they don't need to know what it means,
just that it sets part of you free,
becomes your sole form of expression,
when hope is all but gone,
so write down what you feel,
allow it to be your secret cry.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bertha

    Even just by the title of this one i could tell it was going to be powerful and meaningful just like the rest.

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    This was really good. Had a great message behind it aswell. Too bad when I really needed to let out my secret crys I couldn't. My mother used to always search my room for letters or a diary. It sucked. But yeah, I really enjoyed reading this poem! It was great! 5/5

    `natalie x-x

  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    Wow...now this was moving and heart- stopping at the same time. Firstly I love and agree with the message behind the poem...nice scheme and pace...and it has momentum...

    [lostlaureate - come find me]

  • 18 years ago

    by Falling Up

    Again, i really liked this poem. its exactly what i do. poetry for me is a form of venting i use to get rid of those emotions instead of bottling them up. its such a great thing to be able to have, and you, DEFINITELY have the talent for it. keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Minkus

    I gave this one a 4, because I believe that it was good, but not excellent. I think you could add a stronger feeling if you add more meaningful punctuation than just commas. The words were excellent, but the lack of more varied punctuation took away from their value, in my opinion. Good job, but not excellent.

    -DJ

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