by Katlynn
Amazing job. I like the concept on this poem. I think a lot of people are going to get a piece of paper out after they read this and let everything out instead of doing what they normal do like cut, burn, punch etc when they are mad. i think they will use this instead. amazing job once again. Your very talented. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever. |
Wow, excellent. 5/5. keep up the good work. |
by Pure Silence
This is the prefect description of what writing is, and you did it with flare well done, thankyou for the comment it is great apperechated -sp?- lol sorry I really suck at spelling, wheres my spell check when i need it X( lol, any who keep it up=) |
by Pure Silence
This is the prefect description of what writing is, and you did it with flare well done, thankyou for the comment it is great apperechated -sp?- lol sorry I really suck at spelling, wheres my spell check when i need it X( lol, any who keep it up=) |
WOOOW.... im speechless.... this is one of the best poems i've ever read. wow... you're truly talented. keep it up! |
by Felicia
Thanks for the comment this is a great poem 5/5 |
by Sherry Lynn
Writing has a way to free a soul. I may not be able to express much orally, but in writing I can say it all. Nice work. |
by SuperJenius
You put how i feel about my poems in great wording. i tried a poem with this subject but it didnt work out. totally transcendant poem i loved it |
Nice. good job |
Hey, great job! 5/5 |
by Little Dot
Superb work on this poem. |
by kareeenuhhh
Im amazed! wow, amazing what a beautiful sight! loved it!!!(alot)=) |
by NissY
An exceptional piece of art... |
by Ria
Yes,that'a about it. I guess everyone writing feels the same way!great poem, it manages to put through what you want to...say?Have a nice day! |
by Dreams
I don't know about the others, but this poem makes my eyes burned. I think you penned a situation all writers would feel everytime they start picking up their tools where emotions would start to flow.. This is an incredible write, you manage to reach out to the readers and drew them into your world of words. I'm rendered speechless. Excellent flow, excellent rhythm, excellent stuff. Thanks for sharing. =) |
by Lexie
An Amazing poem... That is the reason i started writing. To let my emotions out. I had never shared my work until i started posting on this site. Wonderful job. |
by VioletRaven
Truly inspirational, you have put into words what I could not. As I read this I felt that wish to write, to express emotion. You've really inspired me to go and write what I cannot speak. |
by EJ
Hey i really liked that.. it is like a reason why we write and i think its important for us to know that when people ask us why we do write.. your poem explains that in a way.. your a good writer and great at expressing things.. nicely done.. bye bye EJ |
by shadowlight
Wow. orion i am impressed, i think your poetic skills are improving (if thats possible as you were good to start with). this is a very strong poem and very truthful about why a lot of people write poetry. |
by Summer
You have a great way of putting things into words that alot of people can't. Emotions that I've thought were indescribable you've found a way to do it. Amazing. |