Ultimate piece of work!!
u r a STAR..:o)

all the best

Love it... Great job! True free form poetry that not only refers to the style, but the mind, emotion and feelings of the writer... 5/5

Lovely work
5/5
love
amy

Nice one, its so true!!! writing is how many people get out thier feelings, emotions... its a great form of expression and release! nice work here

You are an amazing writer!!!

I gave this one a 4, because I believe that it was good, but not excellent. I think you could add a stronger feeling if you add more meaningful punctuation than just commas. The words were excellent, but the lack of more varied punctuation took away from their value, in my opinion. Good job, but not excellent.

-DJ

Again, i really liked this poem. its exactly what i do. poetry for me is a form of venting i use to get rid of those emotions instead of bottling them up. its such a great thing to be able to have, and you, DEFINITELY have the talent for it. keep it up

Wow...now this was moving and heart- stopping at the same time. Firstly I love and agree with the message behind the poem...nice scheme and pace...and it has momentum...

[lostlaureate - come find me]

This was really good. Had a great message behind it aswell. Too bad when I really needed to let out my secret crys I couldn't. My mother used to always search my room for letters or a diary. It sucked. But yeah, I really enjoyed reading this poem! It was great! 5/5

`natalie x-x

Even just by the title of this one i could tell it was going to be powerful and meaningful just like the rest.